Dude,

You and that bear...

Good Animation

The quality of the animation was brilliant, but without the little illustration about what the note said, this animation would've been very hard to follow.
I'll let you guys figure out the wish thing by yourselves.

Amazing.

Just cant beat that kind of humor.

Very Detailed

After running through it several times, I got to say that this was very nicely developed. The story along with the way you chose to visualize the game really brought itself out.

I had suffered a visual problem which I wanted to question; have you or anyone else experienced a weird graphical error when you were at the house for the last time?
The girl's body would tear across making her look like a hologram or something. This actually added a creep factor, which actually made me think something was being forshadowed when she spoke and only persuaded me more so to kick her out. It also made me question the true state of the main character. Was he in a coma or has he been closed off of society? I'm only trying to fill in the blanks.
Weather it was intended or not, I enjoyed the story.
9/10

Very addictive Spinoff.

I enjoyed this game, spending a good hour or two at a time with this. Overall the weapons were good but by the time i had the assault rifle on the 8th round(nightmare) with burst shot, that weapon was about as useless as the pistol. But overall nice game.

Awsome game!

Very nice cant wait to see more of this, and lol your last lv up is Fab! good work! 10/10

Nicely done! I enjoyed the listen.
Some good points;
I enjoyed the transition from just orchestra to synths, as I could picture this song being used for the credits and a final end scene. You send a positive message with the use of the bells, without them, I may not have had the same enjoyable experience through the piece.
I really like your palette of sounds used, Each one fit the other harmoniously.

One thing that almost scared me away from listening all the way through it the strings in the introduction. They come in a bit too strong. If the programs you use allow you to use volume envelopes, take advantage of it in your future songs to smooth Intros and outros.
but when the song gets a rolling, you'll know it gets a rolling!

Look at what was done here and expand on it for future compositions. You have a blooming talent, take advantage of it. ;)
4/5

Very good

I like detail added to where the model is connected and glued, it looks like It could be pulled apart and put back together all over again.
One of the things you could've done to the front was to add afew more details, like the studs found on the model around the center armour to help fill up those flat surfaces.

NIce job, keep it up. Perhaps try your hands on some Space marines
8/10
4/5