Very Detailed
After running through it several times, I got to say that this was very nicely developed. The story along with the way you chose to visualize the game really brought itself out.
I had suffered a visual problem which I wanted to question; have you or anyone else experienced a weird graphical error when you were at the house for the last time?
The girl's body would tear across making her look like a hologram or something. This actually added a creep factor, which actually made me think something was being forshadowed when she spoke and only persuaded me more so to kick her out. It also made me question the true state of the main character. Was he in a coma or has he been closed off of society? I'm only trying to fill in the blanks.
Weather it was intended or not, I enjoyed the story.
9/10